Brock and Tommy:
-You did a great job on your PowerPoint, but I think you guys should choose people who you think are important to the school. I don't think you should choose random people. I really like how you make it into a video. Another thing I think you could fix is to make the wordings more clearer. The words were a bit blurry. Overall it was really good.
Zelma and Clarissa:
-I think you did a great job in organizing your PowerPoint. I think you could fix the content of your PowerPoint. You had lots of information about the teachers you interviewed. I like the different poses you used. You had some random information about the teachers. I think you should of put why there job is important to them.
Gloria and Diksha: I really like the background of your PowerPoint. I think you did a good job. One of the things I think you need to fix is putting the photos first before you describe they're natural environment. Another thing I think you should let the people choose where they want to stand. Overall I really like it.
Joshua and Justin:I really like your idea. One of the thing I think you need to fix is that you should have an angle for your second picture. One one of the picture you said " deck" I think you might have wanted " desk". Just check some of your spelling mistakes. Overall it was really great.
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