Comments for movie Analysis

Claire:

I really like how you describe one of the scene in the movie. I think it really neat that you put how the shots where in the water and on land. I like how you describe how all the movie trailers that you watch are short and exciting.I like how you used different genre for all your movies even though I only watch Aquamarine. One of the things I think you should fix is to add how does the music feel to you and does the music make you feel excited or sad. Maybe you could add different types of shots in the movie trailer, overall you had a good choice of the movie trailer.

Zelma:

I think you did a good job in describing the scene and music of the move trailer. I like how you describe the different type of scene in the movie. I like how you said it started of in the past then to the present to what actually happen to the necklace and the story. I like the tension in the movie trailer that you chose. One of the things I think you need to fix is you need to describe the different shots that are in the movie trailer. Such as either a long shot or a extreme close up or etc. But overall it was great.

Gloria:

I really like you you mention about the music and how it give effects to the movie trailer. I think the movie trailer The True Confession of a Shopaholic really make me also want to watch it. I like how you used describe the different types of shots in the movie trailer. One of the things I think you need to fix, is that I think you have to describe where in the movie has a long shot, and short shot and etc.

Clarissa:

I really like how you said about the different types f shots and how there were different types of shots in the movies. I also like the movie you chose. I think the movie really relates to you personality. Fun, hyper, and eager to find somethings r do something. I thin one of the things you need to fix is how does the music relate to your emotions. I thin you really have to work on that, because I don't really know how you felt about this movies ( Mamma Mia).

Brock:

I think you chose a great movie. I like how the movie has many actions. I think the movie that you chose was a good chose and Shrek. I really like how you chose Shrek. One of the things I think you need to fix is to add more words to your paragraph. I think you need to add the different shots and how the music relates to you. But overall your movie chose was really good.

Justin:

I think that you did a really good job in choosing an action movie of Indiana Jones. This movie was great. However, I think you need to add a paragraph about the different shots, the music and what you think of the movie. I think you need to add these things to get a better grade. If yo actually wrote a paragraph you should put it up because I don't think any one can really find your paragraph.

Alice in Wonderland trailer

I like this movie trailer because of the effect of the movie. The movie make you want to really see it because of the effect and how the directer put the parts that are interesting. In the beginning Alice is show as a meduim shot because it only goes up to her waist. for example as Alice falls into the hole it becomes a long shote because you can see the scenery and the person at the same level. in the movi there are alot of meduim long shots. The director put many different shots so the movie trailor isn't boring when people go watch it to see what it's about.

Alvin and the chipmunks trailer

In this movie the Alvin and the chipmunks 2 I notice that there were a lot of different shots throughout the trailer. I think the most common shot that was used in this trailer was the Medium Long Shots and the medium shot. In the beginning of the movie there was a rock concert playing. This rock concert had Dave get bump in the head with a big picture of Alvin. It really makes me think of the effect the director put into this. The effect of the movie trailer make you want to know what’s going to happen when the Chipmunks go to school and are they going to sing with the girl chipmunks or not. This displays a good mixture of humans and animation to the story of Alvin and the Chipmunks 2.

Spongebob Square Pant the movie trailer

Through the movie trailer of Spongebob square pants, I've noticed that there are a lot of medium Long shots and long shots. For example in a medium long shot, Spongebob was in his own bathroom filling himself with water. Another medium long shot is when the camera shows Spongebob house. The effect of the camera is on an angle. This represents a normal day in Bikini bottom. There were other types of shots including medium shots and close up shots. This makes the movie trailer interesting into thinking what is going to happen. For example a close up shot is when plankton get really red. I think the reason why directors use close up shots is to let the seer focused on the person not the neutral characters.Another effect that the movie creates is that it's a funny movie. I think the effects make you go want to watch the movie because Sponge bob has to save hi ton and get the crown for king Neptune.You can clearly see when there scared or happy with there emotions.

Video clip analysis

I predict that in this video there is 25 shots of the picture show in the video.

Extreme Close Up Shot: 6

Close Up Shot: 16

Medium Shot: 9

Medium Long Shot: 6

Long Shot: 6

Extreme Log Shot: 2

Establishing Shot: 1

Total: 46

No all the shots are not the same length except for medium long shot and long shot. I think the effect is that the longer one have less shots than the short shots. I think that they have to switch the shot up or else it wouldn't be dramatic. I think the shots that they chose for the trailer shows the seer that the video trailer is really good to watch.

Edited comic strip

I chose these three panel because other people said to change the gramme of these three. I also chose these three panels because one of my friend commented on my comic and said I needed closes up and far views. I think this help me improved on my comic even though I've done comics in the beginning of the year with Mr. Northcott in story in art.I really think that some of the people who commented on my comic had some good comment that I had to fix. 

Bitstrips Feedback

Claire's:

Hi Claire, This is Megan here. I really like how you used the emotions for the characters especially for the two stepsister. I like the two stepsister emotion because there always doing the same actions together. I like panel 14 because the two stepsister facial expression are the same and they look very cute together. Another thing that I like about your comic strip is that you put a lot of panels s that the story didn't have a jump scene. One of the things I think you need to fix is that you need to make the character open there mouth when they talk. that is, it was really good.

Zelma's:

Hi Zelma, I really like your main character and how she found a boy rat. I think it's really creative to make the characters cute with big eyes. I like how you used some of the characters that were already there so you don't have to make your own. One thing I think you should in your story it that you need to have a bit more words in your story telling the reader about the fairy tale that your doing.

Justin:

Hi Justin, I really like your comic because it tell the people that he was a means person when he was younger. I think you did a really good job in your comic. I like how you used the bandage when he is kicking the bottle on panels 5 and 6. One thing I think you need to fix is your vocabulary. In the second panel you wrote "rember", I think you wanted to say " remember". That all you need to do. Overall your comic was great.

Gloria:

Hi Gloria, I think you did a really good job in making the scene from this time not the past. I think you did a fantastic job in making the characters, however I think you need to put more detail in the story so it sounds better. Your comic was really good.

Tommy:

I think your comic is really creative because I like how you used the characters so that the look older not too young. One of the things I think you should work on is your speech bubble dialogue. You need to put the little pointy thing at the end of panel 5.

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