Bitstrips Feedback

Claire's:

Hi Claire, This is Megan here. I really like how you used the emotions for the characters especially for the two stepsister. I like the two stepsister emotion because there always doing the same actions together. I like panel 14 because the two stepsister facial expression are the same and they look very cute together. Another thing that I like about your comic strip is that you put a lot of panels s that the story didn't have a jump scene. One of the things I think you need to fix is that you need to make the character open there mouth when they talk. that is, it was really good.

Zelma's:

Hi Zelma, I really like your main character and how she found a boy rat. I think it's really creative to make the characters cute with big eyes. I like how you used some of the characters that were already there so you don't have to make your own. One thing I think you should in your story it that you need to have a bit more words in your story telling the reader about the fairy tale that your doing.

Justin:

Hi Justin, I really like your comic because it tell the people that he was a means person when he was younger. I think you did a really good job in your comic. I like how you used the bandage when he is kicking the bottle on panels 5 and 6. One thing I think you need to fix is your vocabulary. In the second panel you wrote "rember", I think you wanted to say " remember". That all you need to do. Overall your comic was great.

Gloria:

Hi Gloria, I think you did a really good job in making the scene from this time not the past. I think you did a fantastic job in making the characters, however I think you need to put more detail in the story so it sounds better. Your comic was really good.

Tommy:

I think your comic is really creative because I like how you used the characters so that the look older not too young. One of the things I think you should work on is your speech bubble dialogue. You need to put the little pointy thing at the end of panel 5.