Claire:
I really like how you describe one of the scene in the movie. I think it really neat that you put how the shots where in the water and on land. I like how you describe how all the movie trailers that you watch are short and exciting.I like how you used different genre for all your movies even though I only watch Aquamarine. One of the things I think you should fix is to add how does the music feel to you and does the music make you feel excited or sad. Maybe you could add different types of shots in the movie trailer, overall you had a good choice of the movie trailer.
Zelma:
I think you did a good job in describing the scene and music of the move trailer. I like how you describe the different type of scene in the movie. I like how you said it started of in the past then to the present to what actually happen to the necklace and the story. I like the tension in the movie trailer that you chose. One of the things I think you need to fix is you need to describe the different shots that are in the movie trailer. Such as either a long shot or a extreme close up or etc. But overall it was great.
Gloria:
I really like you you mention about the music and how it give effects to the movie trailer. I think the movie trailer The True Confession of a Shopaholic really make me also want to watch it. I like how you used describe the different types of shots in the movie trailer. One of the things I think you need to fix, is that I think you have to describe where in the movie has a long shot, and short shot and etc.
Clarissa:
I really like how you said about the different types f shots and how there were different types of shots in the movies. I also like the movie you chose. I think the movie really relates to you personality. Fun, hyper, and eager to find somethings r do something. I thin one of the things you need to fix is how does the music relate to your emotions. I thin you really have to work on that, because I don't really know how you felt about this movies ( Mamma Mia).
Brock:
I think you chose a great movie. I like how the movie has many actions. I think the movie that you chose was a good chose and Shrek. I really like how you chose Shrek. One of the things I think you need to fix is to add more words to your paragraph. I think you need to add the different shots and how the music relates to you. But overall your movie chose was really good.
Justin:
I think that you did a really good job in choosing an action movie of Indiana Jones. This movie was great. However, I think you need to add a paragraph about the different shots, the music and what you think of the movie. I think you need to add these things to get a better grade. If yo actually wrote a paragraph you should put it up because I don't think any one can really find your paragraph.

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