Edited comic strip

I chose these three panel because other people said to change the gramme of these three. I also chose these three panels because one of my friend commented on my comic and said I needed closes up and far views. I think this help me improved on my comic even though I've done comics in the beginning of the year with Mr. Northcott in story in art.I really think that some of the people who commented on my comic had some good comment that I had to fix.